Gustavos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super smash sticks]

A long way to go

By the way you say rejected, you must have had your previous movies blammed. I would say this movie has a fair chance at having the same fate. But pull your head up. Improve your knowledge of flash. My suggestion would be to get one of the Newgrounds Preloaders, and afterwards learn to make a button in flash so you can give the viewer the option to replay the movie rather than it going again on its own.

And overall, find some other concept to work on. This was a five or six second stick fight, which really wasn't entertaining. Try some other kind of movie. Perhaps a comedy on something, or maybe a flash that has some sort of point or message.

If this gets blammed, then there's no point in stopping unless you strongly feel you need to give up.

Themojo responds:

Ok ill try that one next time

[Charlie and Santas Secret]

Actually good

I liked this Christmas movie. It wasn't too funny because of the humor being an overused concept of Santa not doing something the way we think he does. Also, Charlie screws up everything he does. You should've definitely added more to this fact when giving examples. The voice acting was good for what it was and the art style is very appealing. Animation was nice with spot on effects and smooth movement.

This was actually quite enjoyable.

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SimonG responds:

Thank you!!

[SFC 1]

Great

You made great use of attacks with those sprites. My only problem is that it was quite short.

HellBentGoose responds:

Thanks; it was 20 seconds. I tried making it 10 seconds longer, but I didn't have anymore ideas.

[UU - Happy Kitty Day XD]

I love the AS code

stop();

Stops movie on all layers on the same keyframe that this code is entered. Did you know that?

DustBusta responds:

yea

[The Worst 4th Of July Eva]

good

Certainly good for a first time. The sounds not working on my computer, so I can't criteque on the sounds if there are any. It was pretty funny, but can you have less use of the word like? It gets annoying, and I don't think they even say that in texts.

But this was still a good effort.

darkblue6676 responds:

sorry, there is a problem with the sound,do you know wht it could be?
and i didn't relise i used like so much, so i'll try to be aware of that kind of stuff next time.

[metroid awesome]

Alright

Well, Awesome movies are filled with funny sounds, and the only funny sound is the "do do do do do" sound. The final joke wasn't very funny considering you do have unlimited ammo in Metroid games with the basic gun.

Sorry this movie was kind of weak.

Horsenwelles responds:

go watch some of my other stuff, as i had said MANY times before...

[Vivi has troubles]

225 yen a month?

Can't pay that much, but it was actually pretty funny. I don't know who this main character is though. Good movie, and your dad would be proud if he watched this.

Yes there are computers in Heaven.

segaplaya responds:

im glad about that, when i die, more porn ^^

[Resident Merchant]

Stingy merchant?

This was a great movie that's well animated, but the merchant isn't stingy. He's a well-respected guy who without him, Leon and Ashley would never have lived.

xthesnarfx responds:

I don't know, anyone who makes you buy things during an international crisas isn't the kind of guy I want to be around.